Forth and Back

You are weak, you are strong, you are every lyric to every song.
You bend my blood right to the core and plant my feet on every floor.
So I am everywhere because of you and I don’t know what you do
but I love and I hate it and for the life of me I can’t escape it. 




21 comments on “Forth and Back

  1. nicely done. I love the way it flows

  2. Wow. Excellent work. I can clearly understand the theme thanks to your potent language. 🙂

  3. Trying to think how to continue this infinitely… 🙂

    @GoalieDad37, if you decide to keep this going on…and on…and on… 🙂

  4. Such great wording!!! I like this a lot.

  5. Oh my god LL, that was unbelievable, pretty sure i reread it a thousand times. So good. Can’t wait for more of these 🙂

  6. Reethu Ravi says:

    The last lines. I can totally relate to ’em. 😐

    • Lively Life says:

      isn’t that interesting. it;s like ‘yay im happy i can relate’, but then when u think about what you’re relating to, it’s like ‘ gosh darn it, Nooooo! ‘. i appreciate the comment. are you doing anything to attempt escaping it or have just come to terms with thats the way it is..?

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